Would you please fix the errors in the following composition?
Monday July 20th 2009 (continuance)
I had a trip to the seaside in Chiba prefecture with whole family including my dog today.
We went down at 2PM,drove about 60mile,arrived at my goal around half past 3PM.
We went to the restaurant that has a good reputation with the cuisine of fresh fish,after we called at the souvenir shop.
I ate sushi,my wife and mother ate sashimi bowl,daughter ate sashimi set lunch,leaving my dog in my car.
We went to the seaside and let my dog swim after an early dinner.
All of my family seemed to enjoy today’s trip,of course including my dog.
Note:Would you fix only the obvious faults in grammar and expression since I am a learner. Thank you.
I took a trip to the seaside in Chiba with the entire family including my dog today.
We went down at two in the afternoon and drove about 60 miles, arriving at our goal around half past three.
We then went to a restaurant that has a good reputation for its fresh fish, and later continued on to the souvenir shop.
I had sushi, my wife, mother and daughter ate sashimi, leaving my dog in the car.
We then went to the seaside and let my dog swim after our early dinner.
The entire family seemed to enjoy today’s trip, including my dog.
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